A Daughter’s Care – Women of the Bible

INTRO: As Mother’s Day approaches, I have reposted this poem based on the Bible Story of a mother-in-law and her daughter-in-law, Naomi and Ruth. Although great tragedy struck their family, Ruth proves herself a devoted daughter-in-law, wife and mother. Beverley Joy.

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Young and beautiful, pleasant, and married

To a strong family leader, a decisive man

They lived in a land of promise and plenty

Among their friends and extended family.

But their plentiful life turned into poverty

Their country plagued by famine

The people punished by God Almighty

For stubborn disobedience.

Unable to feed his wife and sons

He packed up and left for a foreign land

They said goodbye to all things familiar

Their culture, their faith and their trust in God.

They settled as immigrants in a land far away

Their boys grew strong, their future looked great

But soon tragedy struck the small family

Naomi was left widowed by her husband’s death.

She had left the famine in her homeland

To be starved of her beloved man

A traumatic loss, a family heartbroken

Who mourned alone far from family and friends.

But love and laughter soon returned

To Naomi’s broken heart

Her two precious sons were engaged to be married

To women from this foreign land.

Blended cultures, a foreign religion

Beliefs and values less godly than her own

As time went on her heart aches for home

And the country God had given them.

She remembered a time back in her youth

When her family lived by God’s way

Moral was high, family leadership wise

Life had been filled with God’s blessings.

Ten years passed by and yet no children were born?

By now their family should have grown?

Again, catastrophe struck the family

Naomi’s sons were tragically killed

The two young wives without babe or child

Three women alone with no future hope.

Naomi was now in a destitute state

Fearful and scared unable to cope

Her daughters-in-law so full of sorrow

Could not console her shattered soul.

The famine was over, so she travelled back home

Her daughters-in-law accompanied her

But the further they walked the deeper she thought

My God has not been with me here in this land.

“Go back to your mothers and your family homes

Remarry, have children while you still can

I have nothing to give to secure your future

You cannot help me for my grief is too deep.”

One girl turned back with tears flowing

To stay in her country, religion, and culture

But Ruth would not leave the grieving Naomi

“Your God is my God; your people are mine.”

Naomi felt empty in her land of plenty

Guilt and shame now fed her sorrow

For having left God’s promised land

“Would God forgive and hear my prayer?”

But Ruth sees hope and opportunity

“I can work for food and make ends meet

God has promised to take care of us

Just as he had throughout the past.”

She went out into the hostile land

Despised and vulnerable

Ruth chose a field, she asked to glean

From dawn till dusk to gather enough.

Boaz saw her in his field

He asked the foreman “Who is she?”

He showed concern for her safety

For farmers and reapers would mistreat her.

His heart warmed as he heard her story

Her faithful devotion to Naomi

Her gentle nature yet keen work ethic

Her humble respect, yet adventurist spirit.

With fatherly kindness, he said to her

“Stay in my field and gather my wheat

Eat and drink with my workers

May God bless you and Naomi.”

At dusk, Ruth walked home with a bundle of wheat

Surprised Naomi asked her how and why?

Excitedly Ruth talked about

The kind field owner – Boaz.

Naomi gasped “I know that man

He was kind to my husband and sons

He is an older relative

A godly man of honour and truth.”

Ruth continued to gather the wheat in that field

Till the end of the harvest season

Naomi said “Tonight my dear

Ask Boaz to marry you.”

“Go to him respectfully

For its part of our tradition

For the next of kin to rescue us

From our childless poverty.”

Nervously Ruth surprised Boaz

Dressed like a beautiful bride

“Please marry me and rescue us

From our shameful widowhood.”

“I’ll serve you selflessly

With honour and respect

I’ll bear children who will fill our days

With laughter and joy and future heirs.”

Boaz felt honoured that Ruth would ask

An older man as he

To marry her, beautiful and young

To bring him, love and children.

With legalities sorted, the wedding was planned

“I shall protect you from this day forth

You shall never want for any good thing

I will love and care for you and Naomi

The town celebrated this unusual bond

Of a wealthy older, God-fearing man

To a foreign woman, once despised

Who, when she was empty, trusted in God.

Who left her family, country, and gods

To draw on Yahweh’s grace and love

As she selflessly loved her mother-in-law

And married a man of Godly honour.

Naomi was raised from emptiness

To fullness and joy of life

Through the selfless love of her new family

Boaz, Ruth, and their firstborn son.

Ruth, a foreigner became an ancestor

Of Jesus Christ our Lord and Saviour

Who selflessly gave himself to save

All who believe and trust in Him.

Beverley Joy © 2017 of Simply Story Poetry

Read or listen to my poems of Women of the Bible: It Takes Two To Tango The Adulterous Woman of John 8:1-11, She Gave From Her Heart The Woman and the Two Coins Luke 21:1-4, Sweet Temptation Eve Genesis 3, Feast or Famine Ruth and I Am Ruth, ‘Thirst Quenching’ The Woman at the Well, Mary – The Christmas Story Part 2 Four Unusual Women, Part 4 Mary, The Christmas Story Part 5 Mary and Elizabeth, The Busyness Excuse Mary and Martha, Her Touch of Simple Faith The women with the bleeding issue,

You can listen to all my poems on several podcast platforms here


The Bible book of Ruth.

The Zondervan NASB Study Bible 1999 Zondervan Michigan U.S.A.

Matthew Henry’s Commentary of the Whole Bible 1960 Marshall, Morgan & Scott

All the Women of the Bible.1967. Herbert Lockyer Zondervan

Introduction to the Old Testament R.K. Harrison.1969 W.B. Eerdmans Publishing

A History of Israel Revised Edition J. Bright.1972 Westminster Press

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